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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another good chapter...
the plot is spanning out and i'm loving it!!
the plot is spanning out and i'm loving it!!
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you've built some pretty interesting characters here! Can't wait to see what happens next! :)
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@1: This was such a horrible story that I had to read it to the very very end. I'm sorry if you feel you have to take this criticism, but if someone else says it, they're probably lying. I'm looking forward ...er... i mean, I'll read the next chapter, but my arm will be twisted. Did I mention I love twisted? (Good plot twist there, btw. They're going to be in bed together, aren't they! Well, onward and upward!)
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@2: this is the worst piece of romance I ever clapped my eyes on. I'm going to read some more, but only because I'm aroused...I mean...only because I'm overflowing with...with...oh darn, this is pretty good. I'm having a really difficult time finding any fault whatso ever. Well, maybe, the chapters are too short. (What I wouldn't do to have a honey waking up next to me some morning)
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, I like the first part, where the two lovebirds started to bond, but I'm afraid the introduction of the Erik has me puzzled. I don't like puzzled. Is there going to be a threesome? Or is this Kayla's love interest? Hm...I await the update
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great character depth.. keep going!
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wahhh... thank you thank you for the update...
please update soon... i am eagerly waiting for something to happen between the two!!
please update soon... i am eagerly waiting for something to happen between the two!!
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the start of this story, can't wait to see what happens next please hurry and update. thank you for writing, nona
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story! Please update soon.
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This Story sounds SOO good.. I really like the story line.. I hope you update soon. :)