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for Leyna and the Dark Man

by SuddenlyRose

person lily
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting start.... do continue!
person Sugoi
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I 'thirded' on that one. Was the Emperor speaking in Modern English or something? Anyways, the story is getting interesting so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Cracker
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story has been real good so far. Though i barely unserstood what the guy was saying...AT ALL lol. anyway update soon k? it was real good and it was only one chapter!
person Dani
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far... but what's with the way that guy talks?