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love that one... post more soon... :)

I think you should continue.. It could have it be like him not really wanting to be in a relationship and her wanting him to be her boyfriend.. but he tells her that it was just sex.. that really hurts her. but he soon gets his head out of his ass when after just a couple days he cant stop thinking about her.. he cant sleep because when he does he dreams of her.. he cant eat because he feels so guilty and lonely without her that he looses his apitite.. when he goes to class he cant pay attention because he either cant stop thinking about her or is power staring at her.. so he sees some guy start talking to her and he hears him ask her out he freaks out and hits the guy and grabs her dragging her away and he confesses .. it would start out with her yelling at him.. but he would yell back something like 'because I cant stop thinking about you ect..' but once that hooker he thought he loved finds out that they are together she cant have that so she desides she wants to break them up but once she sees that he isnt going to cheat on her she does the unthinkable she drugs him and drags him into his room puts him in a compromising position knowing that his gf is going to be coming over she walks in on him with her breaks her heart.. OK I'm sorry I go on tangents of ideas at times.. I hope you dont mind I do this alot. . if you want you can use this idea if you dont want to then dont.. it really doesnt matter :)

Update soon please...

O I L O V E my ideas to be used really I do.. go ahead

OOOOO this story is SOOO good cant wait for the next update.. wow that was an assy thing for him todo btw YOU GO GIRL. .I would have slapped him too

I think it has alot of potental. I really hope you continue.

OMG this story sounds So intresting CANT wait for the update :)

I like your story. It's sweet, touching and tasteful, which isn't something one comes across very often. Besides, your grammar and punctuation are very good. ;-)

WAAAH!!! I really like your story, and the other one "forbidden love", too!! I don´t really have any criticism, because the storys are really good so far...^^ I hope you´ll update asap!!

wow i just read your story, at first i was like yeah young love to it's finest, now i want to beat the shut out of him. He knows whats it like to hurt from the person your "love" damn i feel so sorry for her, but i think he should run after and tell her his true feelinfs. yes i know that would be to easy, then again she doesn't have to give in neither. i'm torn.