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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO FLUFFY!!!! I love it!!!!
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please give us more!!!!!
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG THAT WAS SOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT was SOOO CUTE AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww that's cute. Update Soon! I want to see what happens with that other guy.
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I vote that you use my idea :) where when he sees her he doesnt take No for an answer drag her into an empty room at school and kiss her then tell her that you were just confused and that you thought you wernt good enough for her. blah blah but mabye she will deside that friends is good untill further notice you know to just cool off for a while then let that other guy persue her making shawn jelous.. you know
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was reading the reviews and I think you should go with the first reviewers ideas they are really good.. just the right amount of drama.. BUT hey if you dont want to then dont.. its not that big of a deal, I'm sure that you can come up with something. =)
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it says this is a one shot but i would love to read more! It was a great story and i think you can do a lot with it! i really enjoyed this read.
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey!! ur story is really nice. continue to update plzzzz
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is good, and I like your last update... Probably, you could develop also the relationship between David and Jeanne and Shawn and Jeannie, and take it from there... :)