rate_review Reviews

I LOVE this story.
I'm usually not a sap for love-stories.
But you have me hooked dude.

Renee's a whore!
Keep writing,

Ashleigh.

I fell completly in love when shawn said this
He was almost shocked to find that he wasn'taroused at all by this blatant display of sexuality, but he wasn't

Dont you wish all guys were like that

Ooh.. I really hate it when there is a psycho character in a story... Please get rid of Renee right away...

PLEASE DON'T HER HER!!!! I hope somehow it will backfire on them.

I am worried about jeanne I think I spelled that wrong srry.

hey in the summery it says something like 'because I love you silly girl' have you used that line in the story? because I really like it I dont know why but I do.

This is a great story. You've managed to get me involved with the characters and i can't wait to see what happens next.

Ok so now we know who those eyes belong to, but what is she up to??? We all have things going on in our lives right now, (if you need to talk i'll listen) I like your story, i'm glad that she's trusting her new boyfriend.. can't wait to read hos reaction to the visit.

Just found your story and wanted to tell you that I really enjoy it. Although chapters may not seem as long as some other stories, it does its purpose and doesn't become too.... draggy. I like that you're pretty descriptive but don't base your story on it. I just tried to start reading another story but after two paragraphs of basicly nothing, I just stopped.
And your storyline has alot of potential. With what you have so far, you can continue with pscho-emerald-eye stalker, the whore-ish ex-girlfriend maybe trying to stake a claim again, pregnancy(since you know, they weren't too careful) or all and countless others. Just letting you know that I know shit happens but I'll be reading if you update.

I'm glad that he figured out how much of an A&&HOLE he had been to her. Now who was loking at them?????