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by Nboulet

schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
excelente, sin palabras, ana maria
person Venelite
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was just wondering whether you still are updating this story? I hope so, I think it's really good!
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1

Well of course after reading “Masseur” I had to read another story. After all, you write so well! I have to admit though I’m terribly jealous!!

I can definitely see a recurring theme here with the attempted suicide, but again I think it adds such a powerful emotional element, that it really does make it more than just the regular old spanking story.

You’ve described the new principle as quite the hunk, no wonder she is so nervous being spanked by him. And everyday! Yikes! I probably wouldn’t be able to concentrate on my classes after that!!

Anyway, you have a real inventive story line here, and already with just chapter 1 I am completely sucked in. I can’t wait to read chapter 2


schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2

Okay, chapter 2 is starting off rather interesting! I love how she has to go through the ceremony of removing her panties and bending over his lap. Then he has the audacity to tell her “You need to relax, or this is going to hurt for a lot longer than it should.” Yeah right! Hahaha

I get the feeling the other vice principle didn’t spank her as hard did he? And now she’s slapped him! I’m sure that was a mistake! Yikes a training session? I’m sure that’s going to hurt!

I love the last two lines! It wasn’t the shock of his hand striking her bare ass that had set her off. It was his sarcastic reference to the fact that she bloody well deserved it. Hahaha This is great!

Now that was pretty hot!
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3

So the spanking somewhat turns her on now, as well as the hunky vice principle! To be honest I can’t blame her. He does sound rather hot. That’s funny that she has to slip inside the bathroom to relieve herself. And I just know she’s not getting any homework done! Will he spank her for that?


Oh no, now he’s can smell her arousal. That is so hot! Of course I’m sure she is dying with embarrassment. And because of that, she now gets the paddle! He’s so strict, I love it. You really do write an excellent spanking scene. I think I can feel every swat!

Yikes! That is just cruel of him to tell her that if she gets sexually excited she will get the paddle. I guess she will be getting the paddle from now on…eh?

Anyway, wonderful chapter my dear!
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4

So now she’s having erotic dreams about him. Again I can’t blame her, because hell, her real life is erotic enough as it is.

Now comes the big day --15 long minutes. Will she be able to stand it? I’m glad you put the flashback in. It makes it all more personal. I’m actually a little curious about both of them and want to know a little more about their background.

That is sweet how he holds her afterward, letting her sleep. Is this a sign that they are getting to be intimate? I guess in some ways they already are.

schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5

Oh my God. Did she just do, what I just think she did, right in front of him. That is so funny! Her face must be as red as her rump!

But now were moving into a lemon moment! I love it! Oh I bet he’s not too happy that she lied to him about being a virgin. Well now I’ve just read that I’m right. He isn’t very happy. In fact I think he’s a little pissed. I guess he’s really going to paddle her ass now.

Well darn, I’ve run out of chapters. I keep wondering if he ever gets any work done. Of course, I never did think the vice principle really did anything, at least not back at my school. But I’m hoping in the future he decides to bend her over that big desk he his, because obviously, he’s not using it to work. hahaha

Anyway this was a lovely story my dear! You certainly do write a fun spanking story. I hope you post another chapter!

person reikiwestwind
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great job, i want to know how it ends.
person blondiexoxo
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey i liked it alot it was rough but nice at the same time..neways i liked it and i hope u update soonn
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well that certainly wasn't what I expected. Don't get me wrong I liked it but I didn't expect them to have sex so soon. I guess this will go down the road of masochism.