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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... I liked it! Though the ending was worded in a sort of strange way. But I like this sort of concept and it was interesting, even if it was short. If you were to continue it, I'd most likely read it. But you're posting in an area that doesn't get as much traffic, sadly.
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very excellent start-you gotta continue writing-this is excellent fiction. You must be very intelligent and very imaginative, the two i's of writing that are necessary!