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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF is up with him punching her?! I'm all for pain, but the fun kind. Not the Ike Turner kind. Why not introduce some spanking? Other than that, it's all good and I'm really enjoying it.
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoa! this this fanfic is soo hott that it's got me feeling turned on! please update soon! i need to know what's going to happen!
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, intriguing. I'm very interested to see what happens next, but could he ease up on the beatings? Can't turn her on if she's unconscious, right? Mmmkay, write on. ^-^
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO he cant loose her. Underneith it all I really thinks he loves her.. not just some freaky infatuation but real love.. mabye just mabye they should talk nothing to big just a little conversation like they were still bestfriends
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW, interesting situation brewing. Keep up the good work
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT>> she SOOO likes him :p`
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was like the fastest update ever. I love this chapter too!! keep updateing!!!PLEASE!!
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! I love this.. ok the poor girl I understand that.. but in the end will she not totally enjoy it?
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cute story, good start. Should be interesting to see where they go from here.
Best of luck with the next chapter.b
Best of luck with the next chapter.b