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for Past Pleasures

by Sueb33730

schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
muy lindo, ana maria
person Solitude
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think your writing is very good and this story is very interesting. I was wondering if she knew the 2nd guy, since she knew the 1st one. I wonder if she was shot by accident and what is with the syrup or cream that they keep using on her. Also, this is about the 1st story I have read that the kidnapper (or kidnappers) could rape the girl, but insteads has her enjoy the sex.

Can't wait for an update.
person challen
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Wierd is okay. It can even be GREAT! You are a fantastic writer. I truly hope you're published. If you are, please email me where I can buy any of the publications. If not, I hope you are soon and let me know the release dates! I'm not usually into threesomes, but this has really got me wondering what's going to happen next. Are they devils, angels, warlocks, a coven, aliens, what the heck is going to happen? Damn. I'm reading a time travel book right now and all but abandoned it when I found your stories, but now I'm finished reading them. Can't wait for an update.
person Trampled_Rose
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You+Update= our happiness!! so don't make us sad...you wouldn't want that...would you? huh? Plus, I know were you live. *wink* *wink* Love the story! ^.~
person maccam
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So she took the path of pleasure, who wouldn't. You never explained why they are doing this to her??? either way i want to read what happens next.
person Anon
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update
person kimmie
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg...i want more....please update...and your other story too!!!!!!
person maccam
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!!!!!
person aquamum
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am SO ENJOYING your story !!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this rules please update