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I loved this! I hope you update soon. This story's great and I'd love to see what happens next.

I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
Only my personal favorites made the list:)
Thank you so much for writing!

Honestly one of the finest short stories I have ever read. I thorouly enjoyed it and found no major mistakes, just a few spelling errors and inserted letters... Simple editorial errors. This was a wonderful piece and I am looking foreward to reading the rest of the story.

Thanks, ~ James ;-)

Update, please. This is really good. Both of your stories are. Please update!

I've read your two stories on AFF and I absolutely love them. Your concepts are original and unique. I'd like you to e-mail me so that I can send you some information about a project I'm working on. In a nutshell, I'm starting a website that will host a few (very talented) authors of original (yaoi) writings. Its got a lot more to it, but just e-mail me if you think you'd be interested. I'm going to put this in both of your stories review sections to make sure you get this. Keep up the great work!

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Just a quick portrait of Lochinvar. I wasn't sure what piercings facially he might have, or if his hair was wavy or straight >.> or how I ought to color 'opalescant' skin- the best I could think of was the robots from iRobot, how they're kind of... see through blue. Hope you like ^^.

I just spent the last while reading this piece, and I love it. The depth of thought put into the history, the present, the well thought out plot. Wow. all I can say Is that I wish I could have an imagination like yours so I could write more than life expirences with feeling.

I toroly enjoyed your story and hope to follow it to its end. I also dream of being happy... Loved for who I am.

Thank you for this temporary respite from my tumultuous thoughts.

~ James ;-)

Loved the story! Good plot, great characters and one of the greatest stories I've come across on aff. Bookmarking this story for sure and look forward to more chapters.

Hi, Moniquill. I just found your story through flipping pages of AFF's drama directory. It is shockingly good and I don't say it lightly. Finally we got a Real Writer around here! Why is it in the Drama directory though? It qualifies for Slash, Romance and Fantasy, only 3 most popular categories. Well, as a Psychology major you bound to be dramatic. You can post in more then 1 category and increase your exposure ten fold, lots of people skip Drama. And think, you'll be able psychoanalyze reviews in each category and come to all kinds of conclusions! Posting 1 chapter a week will keep you very visible for at least 17 weeks at this point. Cygen is good enough to make a movie or anime out of it. Thank you so much for taking time to write, Moniquill.

I've reviewed before. I've sent friends to the story and they've reviewed.

YOUR turn - update, please!