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This is so inspired! Very well written, keep up the good work :)

Haha...this is very entertaining!! I like those living dustbunnies *bg*

*glances under the table*

We have some small ones here that just love to cuddle!

Keep on writing :)

GREAT, SO GOOD!!!! The title amused me so I went ahead an read it, all I can say it I can't wait for the next chapter!!! WRITE WRITE WRITE (don't know when you up date only got to it because of the second chapter posting... so sorry if I am annoying (like if you update every week and I just didn't know it...sorry!)) ... I look forward to Ch. 3!

Heehee. 'Tis much easier to understand when I see the chapter from beginning to end. I didn't get queasy this time, but my eye kinda twitches when Bruce is around. He's nicely gruesome. I find it fascinating how you made hell out to be another kind of world where horrors happen so often it's just natural. You capture that feel to it very well. I can clearly see it all in my mind; like watching a movie. Ozel is teh smexiness... I think he's my favorite character. His personality just makes me wanna giggle, an' strangely enough I think it's kinda charming how he is with the Lord of Lust. The fact that the man still can't remember his name is drivin' me crazy. 7 Lords fer each of the 7 deadly sins? I've never run across a concept such as this. I love it. It's very original an' magnificently written. I'm so excited I can't wait to read the next chappie.

Awwwww their so cute. I have never else to say to this story. But cute... and weird.. a freaky on the side.

ooo i loved your story it was funny at some points

This is a really interesting take. Its rare to find something truly original and well written too, which is exactly what this is. Please update soon!

Chapter 1 - WOW! I laughed hard during chapter 1 Ozel is really funny. This story makes me think that I'll be addicted rather quickly. And Marcius is very yummy.

Chapter 2 - Dust bunnies! In the part where the dust bunnies were about to attack `n stuff I couldn't stop giggling! Now I'll have that image stuck in my head for weeks and weeks and weeks and weeks etc. I really love this story though! Update soooooooonnnnnnn!!!!!!!! < 3

I started reading this story in the morning but didn't have time to review so... here it is =] So far I think the story is doing great and just love the description, plot, and the original characters. lol I ESPECIALLY <3 the dust bunnies! I thought it was cute with how they helped with...err...no name with his room -.-; I know he doesn't remember but couldn't they give him a new one or something? Hopefully he'll remember his life and what happened. Out of curiosity will Ozel and Marcius[?] be the only two he mostly interacts in the story? heh besides the dust bunnies >w< lol funny thought. With the way this guy is SO innocent it makes me crack up he can't figure the puns 0.0 OMG someones gonna corrupt his mind!...maybe-up to you. ^w^ Well anyway that's all my ranting! UPdate the next chapter SOON PLS!!! >w< *squee*