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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehehe, I like Peter. He's my kinda guy XD and the "princess" is awsome, but why didn't he just say he was a boy in the first place. (Peter didn't seem to be very upset about it, though judging by the princes sisters, I'll bet he was more relieved...)
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww its so cute i like i.
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Peter is hilariously stupid! I love him! The Prince is great too. He's very pissy. So, please update soon!
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEY! WHAT A FAST STORYLINE YOU HAVE THERE! Anyway, it's interesting and funny and....What? Weird? Is it just me? I think every details about your story is a mess. But it's still the start so don't thinking to much about it. Keep it up. I'm praying for you. BORING_NEKO19 LOVE YOU 'N YOUR STORY
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holey crap! *falls over laughing* this is hilarious! please keep writing!!! I BEG OF YOU!!! *cant type, still laughing*
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh i knew it!
... although i suppose thats why the chapter was called hardly a surprise...
i really like this story so update soon!
's really funny ^^
... although i suppose thats why the chapter was called hardly a surprise...
i really like this story so update soon!
's really funny ^^
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is hilarious! I hope the rest of your story is so funny! Your hero's inner thoughts are so... logical in an odd sort of way. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter, in which I hope we discover our hero's name. So please update soon!
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More!
please please pleaaaase update soon!
i really wanna know whats gonna happen!
and um... is the princess a dude?
cuz that would rock.
^^
please please pleaaaase update soon!
i really wanna know whats gonna happen!
and um... is the princess a dude?
cuz that would rock.
^^
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well I am already mad that there has been no update and there is a cliffy in the bloody first chapter...with out an update quick enough to satisfy my need to know if the princess is really a girl. and this better not be, oh it is a girl only during the day bs
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Boring and rambling with no real point. Perhaps you should do actually do an outline of your stories before you begin writing them, because this one is going nowhere. Additionally, there were several mistakes. Get a beta reader.