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December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ah that was sweet like really cute sweet
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December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
But I want the epilogue to say they lived happily ever after. :) And how is Peter getting children? Aside from that, it was a lot of fun. A great story and thanks for writing it.
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha. I love the old classic of "Once upon a time." This is a "once upon a time" as well but with an originality to it. Ayato, you've tickled my funny bone as well as satisfied my taste for old classics with an original punch to it. I'm thoroughly enjoying myself. Now, chapter 3!
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Did I say chapter 3 in the past review? I meant chapter 5! Bwhahahahahah! I love the fairy god mother. She's someone I wouldn't mind having as my fairy god mother. -groan- Aw, my back hurts. Too much laughing. The evil witch w/ fairy god mother in a tavern laughing away their plan at which it saved the Lans. XD I can't get enough of this. Chapter 6!
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOO I wonder if that kiss was the "true love's kiss" thingy that will bring Lans' masculinity back? I bet Peter forgot the whole thing and Lans happen to kiss him and Peter lost most of his site on what the hell he was going to do. XD onto chapter...... 7!
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha. Peter sure is slow and for goodness sake, bang the prince before the uncle gets a chance to! Wonder if the uncle got there first or Peter..... onto chapter... 8?
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahahaha! Love the first chapter. And the humor! Gah! I didn't realize that Princess was first then Kings and Queens. XD I feel really silly at the moment, but I'm enjoying myself, so what can I say? Hahahaha~ I've going to go and read the second chapter now. Got to know what happened to silly Peter and figure out what the witch did to him now that he's in a confused state of mind.
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ROFL Poor Peter not knowing what he had gotten himself into. If Lans was turing 16, then how old is Lans in Kings and Queens? Oh well, I'll probably figure it all out when I'm done reading. Onto chapter 3!
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September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was funny and wonderful. I laughed the whole time. Loved it so much, though parts were slightly confusing around the whole blood bath part.
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eheh, avoid the dragon...
I'm not sure, but that part cracked me up. at first i wasn't sure about this story,
but i've only read the first chapter, and it seems real good so far :D
I'm not sure, but that part cracked me up. at first i wasn't sure about this story,
but i've only read the first chapter, and it seems real good so far :D