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for Hero *FINISHED*

by Kakashilover

person Doopee
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Bonus chapter! Thanks! ^_^ Y'know I really like detectives, so Danny's already a hottie in my book. ;P
person Sha
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see where you take this. Good start, but I hope the next chapter is a little longer.
person +simplicity
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it so far. can't wait till you update!!
person Doopee
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has great potential! I like how you bring out the emotions between them, even after years of separation. (By the way, if they're step-siblings, is it still considered incest? Just wondering...?)