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for Hero *FINISHED*

by Kakashilover

person maccam
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*BLUSHES* Thanks for the cookies. I love how your setting these two up. So mom knew, in a way it's good that they had that time apart, so now they could ge too know each other in a different way. i won't say no more whats on my mind ^_^ great two chapters. Maybe a dance can ignite her feelings towards him. please update!!!!
person crescent
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a very well written and interesting story! please update soon or i might cry ;)
person sarah
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooooh i want more!!! I like that you finally revealed daniels inner turmoil and how it affects him, it really adds to the story. keep up the great work!
person whitknee
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so if i were to say, post the same thing 25 times would we all get the pleasure of another chapter sooner? ^__^ i like your story so far, i can't wait to see what happens between the two of them...
person tata12772
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is coming along quite nicely...i make sure i check everyday just to be on the safe side for the lastest chapters...please continue...im enjoyin your story alot
person Sylvia
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Post more soon please...
person jellybean
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I love it!!
person Lily
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello again my love lol :D Just wanted to let you know that I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE your story so far.Oh and them sleeping together in the same bed was uber sexy ^-^
person Simple
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gotta Love It
person are
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG this story is great, so cute and loving. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the bonus chapter!