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I really love ur story... Update soon please... :)

Wow great updates so far. I hope you have more !

Hey, i'm going to say one thing, one thing only...I LOVE ur story
keep the good work ok

MMMMM. O.k so your telling us that she is his half sister =(same mother different father)??? as much as i wanted them to be together if they weren't blood related. i'm not sure now. I know he loves her, but incest doesn't go well with me. i like the new charactors, they bring life into your story. well i'll just have to wait and see what happens next.

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!

-claps- Wonderful.Just wonderful.I love how each of your charrie's in your story have completely different characteristics from each other.Can't wait for the naughty parts -grins evilly- e_o Keep it coming luff!

Could you please explain exactly how Daniel and Kara are related? At first I thought they were step-siblings. Is that what Kara thinks too and Daniel knows better? Now I'm comletely confused. Are they really half or full siblings? How does Lohan fit in? Is he Daniel's or Kara's father or neithers? Did he just take care of Daniel, and why? I don't really get how it all fits together and an explination would be much appriciated. But no matter what, I want you to know that I like your story and am really looking forward to more. Can't wait! Update soon!

I like ur story, even though i dont see any romance yet.....
however 'Hero' is great...

Reviewing Chapter 5 *Sigh*
That was a beautiful chapter. I really loved this chapter. It was my favorite so far too. You have done a really good job making us feel her loneliness and pain. You are an excellent writer.

I love that Daniel is perceptive enough to know that Kara really needs him right now, to just be with him, hanging out and just getting comfort. I guess you can't be a detecive if you are not perceptive huh. I won't beg for updates because I know you are busy, but I just wanted you to know that your updates are hte highlight of my day.