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Please update soon... I so wanna know what will happen between Daniel & Kara... ;)

Ok so now she knows the truth, but will you let them at least explore their feelings for each other. they both need to talk more. i'm glad now that it's out in the open. can't wait for more.

So when do we get to Part 2? Hmmm?

I'm a little shocked she did not have more of an reaction after learning he was he half brother, especially since she had just realized there was a definite sexual current in the interactions. I'm looking forward to see how things shake out when he tells her he really wants to move the things in that new direction, will she then truly understand the ramifications of what he told her. It is so Taboo, I love it.

Good story, I wish your chapters were longer, because just when I get into a chapter it is over, I guess that is how you will keep me coming back. Please update soon.

Sara, it wouldn't be incest i there were no blood relation, but don't let that hold you up, it is developing into a great story, if you must suspend the thought that they are blood related and focus on the emotional relationship that is growing. The character development is great so far, I look forward to more angst and love.

Ah!!!orry I've been gone so long! My shitty internet conection has been...well, shitty. XP Anyway, WOW! I can feel the emotion in this chapter. Poor Danny! Whatever will he do? I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! XD

Wow there was a lot of heat in Chapter 8, I liked it a lot. I'm enjoying this story, and can wait to see how he tells her how he is feeling.

Well here I am reviewing again ^_^ Wishing you would update soon.XXXD But I'll be a patient reader and wait. ^^Just wanted to let you know I'm here for ya and to keep up the good work :)

Okay I'll explain Kara's and Daniel's relationship a bit more. Their mother's name was Sara and Kara's fathers name is Jason for reference that'll help make it less confusing. Sara and Jason were married when Sara had an affair with Lohan and got pregnant with Daniel. It wasn't until shortly after Kara was born that the cat came out of the bag and Jason found out about Sara's and Lohan's ongoing affair. Lohan felt entitled to Daniel, and due to the bitter divorce and Sara's leaving of Jason, Daniel lived with Lohan while Sara took care of Kara. When Kara was older and all the divorce crap was over Lohan and Sara got back together, allowing Daniel and Kara to meet eachother as children. I hope this clears everything up for you if not just let me know and I'll try again ^^