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for Hero *FINISHED*

by Kakashilover

person maccam
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sits and waits................
person Anon
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!Another chapter up!-huggles- Twank you!^^ I was getting impatient.Teehee.Rats(and all animals) are adorable XD.Can't wait 'till the next one's up!:D
person Lily
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I posted the one above just forgot to add my name.^^
person Anon
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I apologize my readers. It was infact meant to be updated last wed. But u see, I had an interview and have now started a new job and they arn't being too kind in breaking me in. *pout* I will try to update the story by tuesday, and this time I'm serious about it. I've missed Kara and Danny so much and it's actually close to being the end. *gasp* so please hang in there I'll update ASAP. Thank you all for hanging in there for me and staying with me I promise it'll be up soon. tata
person Lily
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You said ch. 13 was due Wed. right?This wed.?Well anyways that was a nice chapter(part 2) good job.
person Sylvia
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon.........:)
person maccam
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No i don't think Monster is a good word, because he's not. he loves her why does that make him a monster. I feel that if she sorts out her own feelings she'll come to terms that they both love each other. I think it's a good idea to start showing her strong side. great chapter.
person Tarazie
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story so far and it takes me a while normally to get into stories but not this one. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
person Doopee
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Progress! Oh, how tortured Danny & KAra must feel right now... *evil cackle* Love it! I'm sure it'll get more interesting with Alex's involvement in the story. :)
person Lily
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Here I am complying to your request :D I really liked chapter eleven!It's nice and I don't want to seem like a mean ungrateful person but maybe you should speed things up a bit between Kara and Daniel?It just seems like things are taking too much time.