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March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
una historia bellisima donde el amor prevalece sobre todas las cosas, felicitaciones por la misma, ana maria
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the story and will read anything you write in the future. Good Job!
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow i cant say im not alittle sad to see it end..but i couldnt have picked a better place to end it at...keep em guessing...and let the readers imagination take them to where they want the characters to be...thanks and i look foward to reading more from you...ttyl tata
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I have to say, you screwed up this chapter. *14*
You skipped 12 hours of the day. She ran crying right away? Two problems wrong with that. Most likely she would be to shocked to move, and secondly, it just isn't logical that she would make a logical decision to goto Alex's.
You skipped 12 hours of the day. She ran crying right away? Two problems wrong with that. Most likely she would be to shocked to move, and secondly, it just isn't logical that she would make a logical decision to goto Alex's.
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, god...that was SO hot! *drool* I knew he'd be awesome! *wink wink* And it was so sweet of him to take care of her at the end. Great chapter! Can't wait for the rest! ;)
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg the sex chapter was so unbelievable cute!Awesome job!Maybe you could make another chapter with another position involved?-grins naughtily-
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was really visual but i liked it lol well hope to read more soonn
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure how to feel i'm torn. I want them to be happy but they are related by blood. i know love is inportant but so is family. it was a very good chapter full of love.
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! How could you leave me hanging?! XP I am SO ready for the next chapter! Danny and Kara will finally be able to express their love! <3
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-huggles- Thanks for the most awaited chapter!Now I can't wait for the 2nd one -refreshes page over and over again- I'm not stopping 'till it's posted!