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by traciller

person Deadeyes
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue. Your writing style is very good. I am curious to see what happens next.
person maccam
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So sad, poor little thing, yes theres nothing sexy about being raped. is there going to be anymore??
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very disturbing story. You bring across the pain of this situation very well and while the reader knows exactly what's happening, it's far from arousing. Excellent job.

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