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Good poem, very moving. I think your stories lack detail and in the end are just an outline of a story but the poetry works well. Your written English is not great, a beta reader could help you with that. Please carry on with poetry especially when you have something worth saying like in this one. I hope this didn't happen to you but if it did, I salute you for your strength

Thanks

add more details dont be afraid to go in depth here! :)

but good idea i like the whole strong women after the ordeal