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Well Tipsy...I'm a late-comer...and I'll have you know that I rarely review a story anywhere. I like to read, and vote maybe, but I don't do reviews. So I hope you're flattered! You should be.

I'm not normally a porn/erotica writer...and I'm not much into fantasy either until just recently. But I wrote some short erotic stories, and shared them with a few friends. One of them encouraged me to submit them to this site. Of course, after registering, I wanted to read a few other stories to see how mine stacked up, you know? I don't know why, but I went through 5 or 6 pages of summaries before your story jumped out at me...don't know if it was the title or what...but I'm glad I opened it.

I was hooked immediately by your lead in...the boys all standing around wondering how they were going to get themselves out of the trouble they were in. And I was hooked from there on. I've only made it through the first 3 chapters thus far. It's way beyond my 'bed-time' now, so I must stop there. But I'll be back!!

I just wanted to let you know that you are very talented young man!! Are maybe you aren't so young? Either/or, I am thoroughly enjoying your tale, and can hardly wait to read more!! LadyLayla

CHAPTER 10
Hi, Tipsy_Armadillo,
It must of been a cold day in Hell for Lucifer to get so drunk. Talk about the work-related stress, hehe. He DID tell Tyler that he was 'common and ill bred' and so on. And now a lot of liqour and Luci wants him. I even thought that that was Tyler's punishment for taking a part in raping Amenci, you know, Tyler was drunk then and did some things... Or did he, really?

This is avery scary cliffhanger, proticularly after Luci made Tyler understand about 'respect' and promised to dock body parts for escaping. Being hit on a head with a wine bottle sounds much worse than escaping. I bet that that had never happen before, there is no precedent. I really want that update right now!

Good job, Tipsy, thank you:-D

LOl that was so hilarious. i could just picture luc on the ground in pain. I can't wait to read the next. is tyler ever going to see the others again or is it all going to be a two part story?

oh god, poor tyler!! i did laugh though when lucifer's tongue was bitten and he looked completely shocked, and then the wine bottle- lmfao!! will this really keep him pissed off or will he start to like tyler for defying him when no one else would? and when will poor tyler get to leave the bedroom? god, this story is GREAT. i can't wait for more!

i am DYING for a tyler update. i'm willing to wait a long time though, because your story is outstanding, and i kind of like the torturing suspense... ;) each chapter's more than worth it.

and btw, happy holidays!!

Hey I LOVE this fic but. . .um. . .WHERE"S THE SLASH?????!!!!!! I'm not giving up on the story b/c I like it a lot, but some hot sweaty man sex would be nice!!!!! hee hee

CHAPTER 9
Oh, wow! This is really something. I loved it, Tipsy. I had no idea that that was The Death, despite all the clues. I prefer it this way,actually, it would be boring if the fic was too abvious. So, is Death ranked lower then Lucifer? Lucifer is The Boss of 'less popular gods', right? Too bad about Jamie, is he a vampire now? He was not turned into the actual god?

Can't wait till you update.

Thank you.

I don't understand. Why is Tyler dead? he goes with Raven right? And The DIE-ing thing? I wonder if it have something to do with the deer? A big mistery has unfold for all of us the neko to be fold (>o< Kidding). Anyway, big congratulation from the hole boring_neko. Next Time. And DON'T FORGET ABOUT THE LEMON!!!! Waiting! HOping! With BIGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG Eyes!

glad you made it through writer's block, i've been keeping up with this since the beginning and was so excited for the update. holy shit, the imagery in your story is SO intense. and i was shocked as hell at the boy being the deer-like creature! i thought that perhaps it was lucifer but wow, now i have so many more questions haha. keep it up, it's all amazing!!

HEY! You have me REALLY SCARED there. >o< I thought that the PEACOCK MAN is LUCIFER. Glad that it's not. Really glad.-__-; Well, eventhough the Lucifer isn't really awfully handsome but to make him look human is reassuring. I like the way Lucie is now. More if you make Little Tyler as his Cute Slave. Bad that he isn't Lucie type. You know what I laugh until my computer was nearly crashed when I read " I don't interested in you being my bed partner". Ha...HA...HA...HE...HE...HE...HI...HI...HI...HU...HU...HU...HO...HO...HO...KEkeKe. For Lucie being so polite. Poor Tyler. That state is really HURT....? Or rather maybe in Tyler's POV is happyness...? I don't know. But Thanx for the nice update. Funny one there.Look forward for your next update