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holy crap this is a good story!!! i enjoyed what you've written of it. man. i wish i knew what would happen to them in the long run. *begs for the outline* aw man. i really want to know which person is which horseman, and how all of this would have turned out. the story takes its sweet time going through the plot and i LOVE it! it creates just the right amount of anticipation that makes a good story something you'd stay up all night for. great work!

Really really good! And I'm really connecting with the characters, Dion, Tyler, Lucifer, Raven, even Death and Jamie. I haven't figured out what God possessed Dion yet- and I haven't figured out why there's _four_ horsemen, but _five_ teenage boys. We know Tyler's been possessed, but Death doesn't seem to know that yet. So that means one of the four boys still on earth does _not_ have one of the four horsemen. And frankly, I'm worried about that voice in Dion's head. It doesn't sound like it used to be a friend to Death. And what's up with it's fixation on Jamie? Some old flame between the gods?

holy crap, it's almost been a year since you updated! are you coming back? this is one of my all-time favorites... i still remember it fondly and it feels just like yesterday that i found it on here.

Have I not reviewed this story? I could have sworn I had. If not, I'M SOOOO SORRY!!!!!!!! I have been reading this fic from the beginning, and I could have sworn I have been reviewing, but I guess not. Well, that stops now!!!! I LOOOOOOVE this story!!!!!!!!! It's one of my favs!!!!! I am glad we are getting to the slashiness now!!!! I can't WAIT for more!! PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

CHAPTER 13
Hi, Tipsy_Armadillo
I do feel bad for Tyler. He is dead, for one thing. He is completely alone. Darren and Dominick stick together, Jamie and Dion are together too. Tyler doesn't have anyone. He was the most decent out of all boys, and the cutest, is that why Raven singled him out?

All of them are going to the Mount Olympus to retrive Azrael's body, don't they? Can they even enter it, being humans? This is getting even more interesting.

I did enjoy seing Raven again. And the mystery of canned peaches was revealed, hehe. Very sweet! All Fates are pretty cool.

PS: This fic is the best one in the Fantasy section right now. Slash section had an influx of good stories this past few months; I am worried that people don't get to Fantasy section because of it. It might be a good idea to jump to the Slash for a week or two, so more people would see it. Can't promise anything but this story is a way cool, in my humble opinion.

wow. This is phenomenal. Seriously something else. I have to say I love Tyler and Lucie's arc the best. Holding out on the devil for 3 whole days, extremely cool. I get a real "On a pale horse" vibe from all of this that has me missing that series. I think after raping that poor amenci I just wanted the five of them to die but this.. heh this is way better.
~Dizdayn

Hello,

I am glad you are still writing! And the story is progressing very nice - things are getting clearer and I can't wait for the next chapters.

Greetings
Nathaniel

I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
Only my personal favorites made the list:)
Thank you so much for writing!

CHAPTER 11
Hi, Tipsy,
I loved this chapter so much! The last one ended in a cliffhanger and I really wanted to see where this would go. This development was unexpected and so cool! I'd say, it exceeded expectations, hehe. Good job.

Luc IS a sort of prick, I mean, he really WAS going to cut Tyler's arm off. Holy shit! What good is an one armed slave, though?

You've written Tyler's horror so well and him opening the door... Really well.

I am worried now, though. Is Tyler going to disappear now, as the God of Famine takes over? Like, is it going to end as using the boy's body only? Because if Tyler remains as himself then he might hate this idea, he is a nice person, after all. He wouldn't want to cause famine and people suffering. And what about him feeling constant hunger?

Can't wait to find out about the rest of the guys. I can sort of see where this story goes now and it's so cool!

P.S. I added this fic to the Favorites List, it can be found in the Rants/Journals section under the heading 'Golden Nuggets'l. Hope that more people will come and read this cool story:D *hugs*

Just dropped by to say:

HAPPY NEW YEAR!
I like your stories a lot, Tipsy_Armadillo, you are very talanted:)
Hope to read more of this cool story in 2007:-D