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for It Began When Her Car Stopped

by ChloeBarnes

person maccam
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw it's nice to read that there enjoying each other, to bad it's not going to last. thanks for the new chapter.
person Lozz
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. I think Jas and Lana have a wonderful chemistry. Please keep going
person BalancingConfessions
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's so hot but different. I like variety and I definately love this beginning. Please continue!
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More more more!
Yayyy!
person Karen
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it i hope you do write more and ill be looking forword to reading more of it
person kat
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was very well written and i want to see more of it
person aquamum
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More, More, More........more, more more........
person maccam
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MOREMOEMOREMOEMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE
IS THAT ENOUGH FOR YOU!!!!!!
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was amazingly interesting! i hope this does have a second part
person Shadow Blade
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! It was a great story and I want to find out what's next for the lovers.

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