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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 - This has to be one of the best lovemaking scenes ever written on this site....
I've been reading stories here on and off for about 6 months and yours is amongst my top 5 !!!!!
Looking forward to its continuation.
Write on !!!
I've been reading stories here on and off for about 6 months and yours is amongst my top 5 !!!!!
Looking forward to its continuation.
Write on !!!
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man i just love these two. i'm glad that they found each other, i'm just worried that ther peace won't last long. please keep writing.
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this couple. Consider them having pretty little babies and it will make it better. Nothing better than happy pregnant mommy.
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love these characters, your writing style, everything about this story! You are completely different from most of the other writers on this site, and, who knows, you might be able to take it somewhere. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep writing!
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! Incredible storyline! It's awesome! You gotta continue!
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it.
Your story just gets better and better!!!!!
Your story just gets better and better!!!!!
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hot!! really good job :) cant wait for the next update
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its soo good!! I love it. But maybe you went a bit fast between the both of them.
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! I really like this story, and you certainly need to continue it. Ü
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice job. I like the segway into the sex sceneces.. Nothings forced. This story has great potential to go really far, and its defintely one of my top favourites now. I put off reading it, because based on teh summary it wasnt what I"m normally into.. But when I finally did try it I was suprised how much I liked it and what a talented writer you are.
I really hope you keep up this story. Its awesome!
I really hope you keep up this story. Its awesome!