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for It Began When Her Car Stopped

by ChloeBarnes

person Sam
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OO this was SUCH a good chapter I cryed.. I laughed.. and at the end I smiled :)
person Sam
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:) Thats all I have to say at the moment.
person Jas
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving it Loving it! Must Update!
person t.k
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like to see that you've really taken this story so far. I fear though, that with out some presence of antagonism, the story may drift into borderline plotless smut. I like this story a great deal, and would definetly be sad to see that happen. Though I must say I do enjoy the fluff between Lana and Jas. Its so cute and they're both adorable. Keep up the great work!
person aquamum
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sexless chapter is cool, because you wiped out the bad guys who were threatening
our fav couple.
Now they are in a romantic beach house - fun is sure to ensure in your future chapters!!!!!
person Sam
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SO SO CUTE :)
person Jade
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw! Hell yes I loved it! My favorite story right now. I can't wait for the next update! Soon please?!
person t.k
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Simple as that! Cant wait for chapter 7 ^^
person maccam
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, but i feel it's the calm before the storm. can't wait to read more.
person Jade
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
We need more! Awesome story! I'm gonna feel withdrawls if I don't get update soon! :) Update soon!