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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading all 12 chapters of "It Began When Her Car Stopped". I absolutely loved it and I really hope that you make a sequel to this story. Lana and Jas are amazing characters and the story is just great and steamy. Its also really sweet and romantic. Good job on this story.
MentalCloud
MentalCloud
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou for posting such a wonderful story.
It's been an honour to read your words over the past months.
It's been an honour to read your words over the past months.
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Endings are always the hardest. I never want to see great things come to a conclusion.
I must say, this was a sweet ending. It was quite loving and really showed the progression the character's personalities made and how far the plot went. I really enjoyed it, as with all of your work. Sad to see it end, but it was a well done ending!
I must say, this was a sweet ending. It was quite loving and really showed the progression the character's personalities made and how far the plot went. I really enjoyed it, as with all of your work. Sad to see it end, but it was a well done ending!
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWW I loved the whole.. in our bed in our room in our house.. that is just so Idk but it made me feel all warm inside. lol.
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, you're an excellent writer. <3
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again, you so eloquently accomplished another wonderful chapter. Its really beautiful, your style of writing. I honestly consider this a piece of art, not just some story. You're amazing with words, and it really shows.
I'm still excited to see where this story will end up. =D
I'm still excited to see where this story will end up. =D
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh god...I'm soooooooo loving this story!!!!!!!! I have to know whats going to happen next!!!!
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh...I love it so far*smiles* email me when you update!!!!!!^_^
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was amazing! Update soon! Peace.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was exactly what I meant. I'm so glad that you listened to what i Had to say. It shows you actually care for where this story is going, and that it is a valid piece of fiction. Written damn well, if I do say so myself. This chapter, though smutless, was exactly what the story needed to keep it going. Now we see a future with opportunities for these two. It presents many options for you as the author and I'm faithfully awaiting the next chapter! Keep up the superb work.