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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*looks dazed* wow, that chapter rocked! ILOVEDIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Kit, he nearly dies doing another unselfish thing...if he keeps this up....hehe, I love Jinn so much.....and poor Branret....I bet he's going to feel bad for this one....yea.....Jinn rulz though....and Kit is adporible *goes into "I-Love-This-Story-So-Much" overload*
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-blinks at chapter 5-
Eh? Is there suppose to be something there?
Heh, oh well. Chapter 1-4 have been wonderful for me. I love how you spend time developing the characters. Some authors just don't work enough on that.
Kit is my favorite character so far. I love innocent and clueless heros :D
Eh? Is there suppose to be something there?
Heh, oh well. Chapter 1-4 have been wonderful for me. I love how you spend time developing the characters. Some authors just don't work enough on that.
Kit is my favorite character so far. I love innocent and clueless heros :D
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter!!!! I like Rose....She's cool ^^ Sooooooooo..........I was actually wondering what else Kit could do with those cards. now I know XD I adore this fic! So please update again soon, ok? *is compleatly and totaly in love with this fic*
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahaha! Oh i love it!!!! Please tell me you are going to post another chapter soon! I have fallen in love with this story! Finnaly something with a good plot! *is in love* PLEASE add the next chapter soon, ok? *puppy eyed beg*
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story. I want to know what will happen next. Please continue
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I can barely wait for you to update this story.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Coooool, Love the fic so far, but I was wondering with Branret I know you writ very dark skinned, but does that mean african dark skinned or just really really tanned, I'm always confused with that sorrt of stuff o.O;, anyway like I stated before, wicked fic, please update soon.
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, everyone was new at one time! When I first started posting, I had nobody to help me...I just kinda went at it. But anyway, the format is weird and the way it's posted makes it hard to read cause you have to keep scrolling over. Regardless, it's still worth the read! Nicely crafted characters and so far an interesting plot- I give you a high-five! I can hardly wait to see what beholds our dear Kit next! And I bet that one woman who nobody thinks is hot is that bitch (Fate?) who tried to have him killed. What a skank. :P
Another high-five is waiting for you if you update soon!
Keep up the good work!
Another high-five is waiting for you if you update soon!
Keep up the good work!
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute; I hope Kit ends up happy, with some nice male lovin to come in the very near future (hint, hint!). Update quickly please!