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POOR HOLY, he just wants to be with his love, and poor Kit, confused by so many things and having to save a whole plant/world, I hope it all works out, anyway it's great so far please continue.
P.S. My fav charaters are, Kit, Jinn, and Branret.

aw no poor cry baby holy was attacked! por que?!

And I don't have a favorite, but I do like Jinn a whole lot. Maybe cause he's the only one initiating the lovin, but mostly cause he's amusing. And spunky. I like spunk.

Ahhhh! Lots of lovin! That's my kind of chapter. Soo I like Holy and Gate, and not only because of the amusing names. I want to see what happens to them!! They better not die. I don't think they will, or you wouldn't have put a sort of background for them. Unless you just put that there because you want us to like them then watch them die!! You bitch! :0


Anyway, poor Branret. Maybe he should be more of a man and stop his pussy cuddling and start slapping Kit around. That's what masochist Kit needs ;) But I see where this is going, I do! I have awesome predictable powers. So it better happen like I think it's going to happen! *shakes fists* Or maybe you should surprise me. Or do both! Ohhh excitement.

Awwwww!!!!! that was....cute? Poor Jinn, he's in denial.......^.^ OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE UPDATE!!!!!!!!! (this too was very fast! I LOVE it!!!!!!!) *gives cookies for your hard work and dillagence* YAY!!!!!!JINN GAVE KIT A HANDJOB 0.0 XDXDXDXDXDXDXD!!!!!!!!

Yay these chapters make me happy! I love your story, and your characters, and everything...give me more!! Feeeeed me!! A chapter everyday makes a viewer go Hurray!! Aha I just came up with that, pretty classy, eh? :P

... I ran out of chapters to read =( *sniffles* I reviewed your other story, where i also unfortunately ran of chapters to read =( I love how Kit is so clueless and just plain... cute. I'm waiting for the kawaii ketze and elf to jumps his bones ^.^ But before that can happen we must see how this whole suit of the earth bit works out >_< Damn greedy bastard playing with poision! I hope he gets his butt handed to him >_< Thanks again for another story i can look forward to being udated! *hugz* x3 Ur so awesome.

OH NO!!!! WHAT GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT?!?!?!?!? POOR KIT! WILL THEY RESCUSE HIM IN TIME?!?!? OH UPDATE AGAIN SOON PLEASE!!! I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!! (I love these fast updates, by the way!!!!!)

Yay. I really really like your story, so much in fact that I read the whole thing instead of going to bed. Just so you know, I'm only going to get four hours of sleep because of you! That's terrible manners, you know.

This is a really great story, very professional. I'd love to read more! Respect and kudos to you ^^

OMG!!!! NEW CHAPTER!!!! Sorry I didn't say anything sooner, i've been really really busy.....but!!!! poor Brenret!!!!!!! And Jinn!!!!!!! *huggles them both* You are my hero for writing this stroy!!!! (oh, and poor Kit too, because of his cluless-ness, lol)

*cookies and plushies and love!!!!!*