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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nooo... There goes my favourite pairing. Should have see this come. Bad elf and... quarter god (What is a son of demi god supposed to be...) - why do they have to take the wrong hearts *huffs*. Anyway, your explanation of the relationships seems conclusive. Is there any chance for some Branret/Dalune action *wink*. We'll see, hope dies last.
The story progresses really good and I'm happy that the finish is to come in a few chapters (though I'm a little sad at the same moment. But you won't stop writing, won't you?! So there are more stories I can anticpate (with more Katzes) :-)).
All hail to you, Rei
Nathaniel
p.s. Now that Kit has learned a lesson in courage he needs another one in subtlety. *lol* Just joking ;-)
The story progresses really good and I'm happy that the finish is to come in a few chapters (though I'm a little sad at the same moment. But you won't stop writing, won't you?! So there are more stories I can anticpate (with more Katzes) :-)).
All hail to you, Rei
Nathaniel
p.s. Now that Kit has learned a lesson in courage he needs another one in subtlety. *lol* Just joking ;-)
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
write more damn u! lol my fav characters r as follows jinn gate rose and kit and holy are equal
i hope jinn ends up with kit i really do cause it would be like yay!
i hope jinn ends up with kit i really do cause it would be like yay!
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and I'm really loving up. You really must continue, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHERE DID JINN GO????!!!!!!!, please don't tell me that Jinn is gone for good -puppy dog eyes-, and what's goning on with Branret (SP?, Sory if it's wrong) and Dalune. Don't tell me he's going to leave Kit, for Dalune is he...
mutters: even if I like the idea of Jinn (if he's coming back) and Kit together.
Anyway please update as soon as you can, I'm hooked on this fic. I love it.
mutters: even if I like the idea of Jinn (if he's coming back) and Kit together.
Anyway please update as soon as you can, I'm hooked on this fic. I love it.
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just picked up random stories and I came to contact with yours.I Admit that I didn't actually have any expectations first but then I started read it and noticed it's very interesting and has nice ring to it.
I can't help to love Jinn. He's such a great character. I think he and Kit makes such a great and same time amuseing couple.I hope they find each other ^_^
Keep up with the good work and update soon.
I can't help to love Jinn. He's such a great character. I think he and Kit makes such a great and same time amuseing couple.I hope they find each other ^_^
Keep up with the good work and update soon.
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I do like Branret the most (How do you pronounce "Katze"? English or German?). Jinn is somewhat cool but I like people that aren't acting all cocky and aren't forcing themselves on others (and I'm not that sure if Kit really wanted it). And I have a weak spot for catboys (wished there were some real ones). That is why I find it somewhat sad that Jin gets all the "fun" with Kit. Let the young ones get some fun together - sometimes it's hotter when two unexperienced guys get it on (perhaps with Kit trying some of the things he "learned") :-)
For your writing I have to say I like it very much. There is a good balance between backgound, emotions and action (fights/sex). Your style is clear, easy to understand and pictorial. The chapters have a descent length and so on. To sum it up, I really enjoy reading this story and am eager to get more as soon as possible.
So far
Nathaniel
p.s.: Please make Kit a little less whiningly. After all he is a man - isn't he ;-)
I do like Branret the most (How do you pronounce "Katze"? English or German?). Jinn is somewhat cool but I like people that aren't acting all cocky and aren't forcing themselves on others (and I'm not that sure if Kit really wanted it). And I have a weak spot for catboys (wished there were some real ones). That is why I find it somewhat sad that Jin gets all the "fun" with Kit. Let the young ones get some fun together - sometimes it's hotter when two unexperienced guys get it on (perhaps with Kit trying some of the things he "learned") :-)
For your writing I have to say I like it very much. There is a good balance between backgound, emotions and action (fights/sex). Your style is clear, easy to understand and pictorial. The chapters have a descent length and so on. To sum it up, I really enjoy reading this story and am eager to get more as soon as possible.
So far
Nathaniel
p.s.: Please make Kit a little less whiningly. After all he is a man - isn't he ;-)
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Must have more. This story is amazing. It reminds me of Escaflowne but you made it yours. I love the turmoil Jinn is in when he doesnt realize that he is in love with Kit and cant wait for him to express it and hopefully Gate and Holy join Kit's party and Dulane and Bartane finally get together. Love it and want more. update soon PLZ!!!!!!!!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you!! update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahaha wow. poor, lucky kit. He just needs to get down with both of them at the same time, then he will have no need to feel guilty or ashamed. muwahaha
and, holy and gate are sweet. *collective awe*
and, holy and gate are sweet. *collective awe*
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, loooong background-story about our favorite commanders. Hope there's (sort of) a happy end for the both of 'em.
As for Kit: I hope his cuddling around with the Katze is a result of his confusion and stress. Jinn/Kit or Jinn/Branret for pairings! ^^ Keep it delicious.
As for Kit: I hope his cuddling around with the Katze is a result of his confusion and stress. Jinn/Kit or Jinn/Branret for pairings! ^^ Keep it delicious.