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for Destiny's Fool

by reidavidson

person Julian
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*twicth, twicth*
person Kaikan
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love love love this story. please dont kil Kit. if you kill Kit who will Jinn have to molest.
person Cristina
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, updates! ^___________^

I LOVED the lemon...mwhahahaha
person Chaos Raider Tenshi
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-fangirl squeal- that was the BEST, mmmmmm, it really was, I so glad Jinn's back, and with Kit, I've been waiting for the lemon, I really have, but please update as soon as you can, I can't wait to find out what happened, and also to find out if the others heard Jinn and kit, that would be so funny, and poor Kit would be so embarresed hehe, please update quickly.
person hechoenmexico
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that boy sure has a lot of stamina...three times! Whew I wish my boyfriend could go that long...

But anyway, lovely bit of smut there.
person Cristina
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I hope you update soon, 'cause I wanna read more Finn x Kit...they're so cute! <3
person Nathaniel
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello again,

so he did it. Actually being "usefull" :-) And Jin is back. Never was my favourite character (as you may have noticed) but it's good to have him back and the group complete. Now Melanie's gonna pay, that bitch!

The beg-for-BranretxDalune-smut is a thing of its own. You see I have problems with my back and knees so kneeling is impossible. And because English isn't my mother tongue I don't know any phrases to cajole the almighty Rei worthily. So i'll obsequiousely try my best your Heighness: Please, please, please with a big icing on top?! *cough, cough* There goes my pride... *waves* :D

And you know, you want it too. You can see the scences already in your imagination you only need to write them down. So grab a pencil/keyboard and let the words flow *hopes this subtle manipulation works*

What's more vto say? Keep'em coming, this is one of the best stories here at aff, Rei!
Greetings
Nathaniel
person hechoenmexico
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ugh Kit's lucky number is 21, too! It was mine first, that porch monkey! Well anyway, that sad little love triangle soon turned to everyone got who they wanted! Hurrah. Now...they must prove their love...only one way to do that...



person T_B
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"I’m pretty badass when I have a concussion." OMG, this line had me crackin' up! The ending scene was funny, too. Keep up the wonderful work - I'm enjoying your fast updates. ^^
person TalkingButterfly
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! I really like the new Kit. When The Magician started to talk about changing destiny and the cards, I had a major Escaflowne deja-vu. ^_~
Oh, and hurry up and find Jinn! I miss the little fella...