rate_review Reviews

This story is old but I stumbled upon it. It was delightful and heartwarming and well written. Thoroughly enjoyed. Much laughter and internal fuzzy feelings.

 

Also, Jinn and Rose were my favorite characters. I also loved Gate. I shipped Kit with Jinn from chapter 1- thrilled it worked out. They really were perfect for one another. Huge fondness for Idio as well- would like to stumble upon more works with him if that was ever possible.

 

Thanks for the story.

Damn... you're good. One of the best stories I ever read! Kit is awesome and I LOVE Jinn!!! Hope you write the Banret/Dalune smut you promised!

Man i loves it ;3

Nothing. Nothing is better than 'doing it' on Idio's couch.

You need to do a mini, one shot sequal of pure smut. For closure. I need closure. *nods* Haha.

Maybe I'm just super sad that it finally ended. Yeah, I think that's it. I'm gunna cry now.

Amazing story. Love it forever. And I mean 'FOREVER'!!!

I loved it.I hope you will continue to write fanfiction, because I sure as hell wanna read more of your stuff! <3

Thanks for sharing this wonderful fic with us! *glomps*

Adorable.

Good ending. Though the climax you built up was released a little bit... unspectacular... rushed. So was the ending...

Anyway, this definitely is a great story and I hope it won't be the last you publish here at aff. Is there a mailing list where you keep your fans up-to-date?

For now farewell (does that sound lofty?)
Nathaniel

ps: What is with the BranretxDalune one shoot? ;)))

It's over?! I'm going to cry now! I know i'm not a regular reviewer but I have been with this story from benginning to end. I knew that Jinn and Kit were going to get together (Half-hoping it too) and I really did thought that Kit was going to die at the end. But I'm happy that He's now gets to be with Jinn ...on Ido's couch. Great story. can't wait for more in the future. Ta.

Wow - amazing chapter. A few typos here and there, but all in all it's a wonderful prelude to the final chapter. I loved the way Kit talked about destiny! I'm so proud of him... ;) Just keep up the great work and pleeeeease don't let the Little One die! ^^

You know, I was expecting you to go the route with Kit where the boy is overly cold to everyone, not letting anyone in, a grouch, etc., etc. However, you didn't, and I'm glad that you didn't. That's pretty well-worn territory, and not all who are distant are cold. I like the story, the suites and use of the tarot desk is a fun idea, and the characters are all very intriguing. I also find it refreshing that Desert Rose is a woman and a very powerful character - a rarity in yaoi stories. I like this story, can't wait to see what happens next. Good luck with your writing.