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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 2
Hi, Fanatic4Lemon (lovely name) or Remon Koybito . I was looking through AFF in the mood for a good dark story and there it was- updated at last. Wonderfull fiction! Not too many authors can pull off a convincing dark story, you have a gift for it, no doubt. I like the idea of a mad vampire. Was he mad as a human or Immortality took its tall on that creature? In most fics vampires are cool, calculated and superior, it is getting old sometimes. Your twist is truly original and refreshing. Definetly love your writing style- POV of a crazy vampire--totally cool. Good thing you decided to continue. I am not sure about mayor's sons name: In A Good Night it was Jonathan Parker and in Another Few Nights it is Owen. I just take it it's a middle name or a nickname. Please update this, Remon Koybito, can wait to read the next chapter.
Hi, Fanatic4Lemon (lovely name) or Remon Koybito . I was looking through AFF in the mood for a good dark story and there it was- updated at last. Wonderfull fiction! Not too many authors can pull off a convincing dark story, you have a gift for it, no doubt. I like the idea of a mad vampire. Was he mad as a human or Immortality took its tall on that creature? In most fics vampires are cool, calculated and superior, it is getting old sometimes. Your twist is truly original and refreshing. Definetly love your writing style- POV of a crazy vampire--totally cool. Good thing you decided to continue. I am not sure about mayor's sons name: In A Good Night it was Jonathan Parker and in Another Few Nights it is Owen. I just take it it's a middle name or a nickname. Please update this, Remon Koybito, can wait to read the next chapter.
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet ass ending my friend haha ( you and those freeking endings ). I can't wait to see more... I wana know about this kid.. Owen is it? following after pearl! I like the dagger calling him darling. Anywho, still crazy as ever, writing style is a bit different from the usual but i liked it. And oh forgetting those insignificant mortals... awesome.. haha. As always the desicription and detail made it a great read! Thanks for getting it up, hope you have time for another one soon!! :D
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE! MORE! MORE! LOVE IT!
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey! so glad you desided to keep going with this story, i didnt think the insane was too down played, still sounds nuts to me. Anyway, can't wait to see what the hell is up with this kid. write soon!
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so, you're making a sequel. Wonderful! I just can't wait to read what's going to happen now...
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet wonderful continuation. I really like the way pearl messed up those punks. Not to mention the fact that he's evil as sin and isn't really cognisant of it hee thats always a pretty winning combination... Inhuman strength and nothing holding you back. Please write more... I do agree though, he seemed a little less crazy and more, just sinister in this story.