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for Another Few Nights

by Zoshia

person JaceQuin
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read it again. *snugs* I really like your writing. It doesn't get boring even when you read it multiple times. Though I'm really eager to know what happens next. *licks you* I hope you feel up to writing some more soon.
person WedsLem
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOO! How ...mmm... delightful? *cough* tasty? anyway... f a n t a s t i c update to be sure. Hearing about Pearl kicking ass was quite exciting as well! Interesting story about the name too.. another 'she' ?? hmmm.. hopefully there will be more about that soon?? ^^... plx? Anywho!! Keep writing I love it love it love it!
person JaceQuin
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*loves upon you* I read a good night a long time ago and then the beginning of this one. I didn't realize you'd updated! *happiness* I really love this story. Pearl is so crazy. That's what makes it good. Having Owen describe the blackout later is way better than if you'd described it as it was happening. Especially the part where Owen comes back and he thinks Pearl's going to kill him so he runs but Pearl catches him. It would have been overdone if it had been happening then but his describing it later is good. *more love* Please write more soon.
person Bobobo
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome! wonderful chapter. can't stop loving it. I hope this review increases the chances of another chapter coming soon >.>
person Bobobo
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*growls* You know. I little bird told me you would be making new chapters every couple weeks... I' not going to name any names of course... but you know.... that beta tester might want a story at some point soon. *nudge nudge, wink wink*
person WedsLem
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i can't stop loving this story. i love your attention to detail in dialog.. the green glow of the alarm clock was discribed in a way that hooked me in and the rest of the story kept me wanting more. sadly i havent read this story in a while... but luckly that means i get to read the next chapter right now! wee!
person WedsLem
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shit... SHIiiiit! well, i can see why this was a fun to write... what the hell is Pearl going to do with our her?? it was crazy cuz i loved when he said "we run" like she is another person, closest friend type feel or whatever.. and now this?? as a reader.. i love you.. but you torture me! stupid cliff hangers >.< love to hate them
anyway! unexpected twist, love your writing! cant wait for more.

person WedsLem
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh also, thanks for the site on Malkovians .... should be interesting...
person Bobobo
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OooooOooOoOOoo Pearl is even more of a badass than i thought, a buncha high school punks is one thing, armed foes are quite another. Great job, can't wait for the next one...

P.S. Why'dyouenditthereomg!??!!?!11one now i'm gonna have to wait to see what happens without that little voice.... *shakes fist angrily.... but in a loving, wanting more story kind of way*
person Bobobo
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"I am also sure he is more delusional then me" thats pretty great coming from a malkovian. really super story, i love this chapter. The sex was a little short for my.... taste but then i'm more enthralled in the plot anyway.. its so good i can't wait to read more.