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for Luck of the Dice

by Mike256bit

person The Lady Friend
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Someone's* getting a reward for this little piece of fiction. Wa-ink!
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A great read. A sexy lady-pirate on a cursed ship that makes everyone on board horny... makes a steamy story. I'm a bit turned off by her unorthodox name tho'. 'Quincunx'? What kind of name is that?

*gets shot on the face like that other character that's misspelled her name*

Anyway. Scene transitions are a bit vague, but I like your description of the sex. I'll be looking forward to further adventures of Ms Q!
person banshee
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
liked your writing very much! easy-flowing description, well-paced.
congratulations!
person Anon
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Reeeeeally well done! Both well-written and hot. Write more!
person seductionslover
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well if your desighns are anything like your writing im sure you'l have no problem sighning a contract with some major comp
person Cindy
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, this is sooooo hot! Please write more... I'll do anything ;)
person ???
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"She collapsed under his weight, struggling for a solid breath as waves, both tiny and massive, moved up and down her body. Twitching, she uttered something that may have been actual words, but neither of them was in the state that permitted thought or speech." Bloody awesome story! PLS oh PLS write more??? and the quote... my fav part =)