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for I Wish

by dark1starr

person anomaly
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it
person Sonyasha
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep updateing, kepp updateing, keep updateing, keep updateing! cause to tell you the truth this story is becoming the best genie story i have EVER read! so, keep updating, keep updating, keep updating.

Ja- Ne =^_^=
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha!!! That's what I like about your stories, everyone goes after the girl! lol. But inside the amulet huh? That is cool, but I would hate being trapped in anything.
person Morgan
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like this. keep going. are you going to have the genie and the girl get together?
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell yeah! I love it! Hehehe I am still confused on who's side Abdet (sp?) is on. Sorry but I am unfamiliar with Arabian names. lol.
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the reviews everyone. I am really glad that you all like it so far.

To Dagger: She may seem like she has everything but bad always happens. If you ever read my other works you will see plot twists and at least one conflict that makes things seemingly difficult. I guess I like this because I know it and I write it. I have the story finished and have only just started posting it. I can say with certainity that it is 13 chapters ( I think ) Lol.

I don't know if I made my warnings clear though. I am a shy writer and while I have written some described love scenes I generally tend to prefer assuming actions. Lords, I blush so bad when I write the stuff. I am 29 and have 2 kids and I still can't talk 'dirty' in private. As hard as it is to believe, it's true.

I hope you keep on reading and reviewing for me though. More chapters to come. If anyone wants to say hi to me on messenger, contact Starfyre_Renwal. or you can e mail me. Dark1starr@aol.com. I don't bite...well, mostly. hehe..no, kidding. I try and be nice to everyone on here.

Thanks!

Starfyre
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No Scaring here! Keep it up! I love it, lol.

I welcome them and anyone else who wants to do a review. I welcome the challange of being scared off with long, good reviews.


Starfyre
person Sonyasha
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! awsome story!! i cant wait to read the next chapter. update soon.

Ja-Ne =^_^=
-Sonyasha
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
About time you have a new story! lol. I am going to keep on reading it too. Can you give better descriptions of the main chars though please? Like hair color and all?
person Nymphidalia
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a cute story! can't wait till you update