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*Bowing in humble adoration...then jumping up to give standing ovation*

Brava, Brava, Bravisima!

You have outdone yourself, my dear. I am beside myself, trying to find the
words of what to comment on first. The plot is gorgeously cute without being saccharine sweet,
the Genie and Kitten are adorable, and I love your dialogue.

Please consider a sequel, I think you could really go far with this storyline and these wonderful
characters!

Bruhier is a but head but at least he now has to act better.... the jerk! :P And his dad is worse.... he didn't change.... And he wanted a girl his sons age!! GROSS!!!! Ewwww! I'm so grossed out by that... but it does happen. lol I love everyone else though... other than the Kithkin... but that was obvious I think. It was such a great plot! I can't wait to read your other great originals! I hope that they are all as great as this one! Thanks soooo much for writing this fabulous story!

Kaho

wow this storys rocks and im only on the first chapter

Wow. Absolutely beautiful. I've always said I have a definite thing for happy endings, and that...is a happy ending if I ever saw one. You wrapped it all up in that one final chapter! My appologies for taking so agonizingly long to get to this, and it most certainly wasn't because I didn't enjoy this ending, I truly did, I just tend to be a lazy person. (Especially with reviews, believe it or not. Tells you something about how much I like your writing if I take so much time out of my day to gush, right? -grin- Kidding. You owe me nothing. The priveledge of reading your stories is enough; they certainly deserve something for all the time you obviously put into them.)

Anyway, onto the step by step synopsis of my appreciation for this final chapter. The wedding was so lovely; I was just ecstatic to finally see Kitten and Rami together in ceremony as they should be, and brought together by an all powerful diety too! Perfectly fitting. Not to mention, not only does Leon stay young and get back his memory, but he gets his wife back! Kitten gets to finally meet her mother, her father has his beloved back to him, Felicia gets to see her daughters wedding, and possibly most importantly of all, now they get to live together and enjoy it for an eternity! Can't get much better than that, can you? -chuckle-

Plus, I saw my favoritest couple ever! Whoot, whoot for Abdel and his goddess Calypso! Ah, I just totally have a thing for the quiet, clueless, totally hot guys...and Abdel most definitely falls in that category. Though now, he also has his emotions! So sweet. And he can finally understand the tumble of blubbery lovey-gushy chaos errupting around him. Lol.

The fact that Rami and Kitten kissed before the official call...and kept kissing...and kissing, and kissing, and... Rotfl. I found that absolutely hilarious. Had me grinning from ear to ear the whole time. Humor always tends to hit that soft spot in me, and you did a terrific job with it, while making it sound realistic and believable at the same time. I could totally see them doing that, you know? -chuckle-

And Bruhier! I think I like Bruhier. I don't care if he was a pissy little spoiled prince before. I believe him when he said he'd change, and I hope it's all for the better! (And coolio that he has that one perfect girl out there for him. I don't know if you'd ever write it, but I think a story about Bruhier and his quest to remake the kingdom and find his destined love would be fascinating. I'd certainly be interested in reading it. It has potential.) So I say good luck to Bruhier, yay for Abdel (or in Kitten's words "Go Abdel!". -grin-). And happily ever after for everyone else. Nice.

Terrific job, sorry it took me so long to tell you, and sorry if it seemed like I was picking on you alone about the bumping to the top thing. If it really is more than just you doing it, then my complaints were unprecidented. I just didn't notice. Really enjoyed this story, and I hope you continue to get worthwhile feedback on your other fics. But, remember that in the end, the most important thing is that you enjoy the writing process. Good luck! (And chao for now! ^_~)

-Moonstar

it feels like so much was left out. like the kithkin. they'll surlly come back, and i remeber reading the the king of the gods..uh...ferir said that Rami and Kitten would become gods. and that there children would be the Celestial ones? or some thing along those lines. if you want to stop it here please make a seqeul. i wanna read more of this story.

I never expected Kitten's mom to show up! How cool! Hehehe, I never expected that kind of ending too. I love it!

Hey, I havent had time to read all of your story yet, but so far I love it, I can't wait for more of it. I would have reviewed more but I just barely have time to read the new chapters. I will try to review more.

one thing to say about this fic: i REALLY like it...makes me want a jin of my own ;)

although, I did find that Kitten seemed a bit out of character when she was fighting with Delilah - then again, I think we're all a little "different" when we're jealous/defending "what's ours" :P

Ohhh I love a good cat fight. Awww poor Leon. I sure hope that he remembers her.

Oh man! I love it! This is all too cool! Please update as soon as you can. No rush though. I know what it's like to be rushed.