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for Football Practice

by AnaisWannabe

person Niiro
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was...that was HOT! I loved it.

Tim, you naughty manwhore!!!

Who am I kidding, I would've been watching too! Hell, I'd even watch with Tim involved!!! My imagination is an evil thing!!!
person Kat
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh please tell me there will be more to come. *big eyes* I loved the way you ended the story, hehe. "..wondering if he wanted his fantasy to come true afterall." Best line ever. :D
person rin
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You must make another chapter! Plz! I want to see what happens! Update!
person In2Deep
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE OH-FUCKING PLEASE ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER TO THIS OR TWO OR THREE! PLEASE, I WANT TO SEE HIM BECOME THEIR BITCH AND BE AT THERE BECK AND CALL... HAVE HIM FUCKED AFTER PRACTICES, AND POUNDED AFTER GAMES... SOMETIMES TWO OF THEM INSIDE HIM AT ONCE AND AN OCCASIONAL GO INBTWEEN CLASSES.... JUST MAKE HIM THEIR COMPLEAT AND UTTER BITCH! PLEASE I SO WANT TO READ THAT!
person Cindy
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! More Please!
person Black Ice
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:nosebleed: I always loved storys that involve football teams and yaoi. >< And now, I'v got a story dancing around in my mind 'cause of you. This will be interesting...
person Sugar High
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why oh why did you stop!? PLEASE write another, I know that's generally not your style, but PLEASE!!!!