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by AnaisWannabe

person Niiro
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was great. Its more sensual than just hardcore smut, and that's just fine. Its like you can feel(emotionally) how Alan and Alex feels, and understand them. Not many authors can get the readers to actually, kinda, connect with their characters. Especially in such a short piece, but you've managed.

I applaud thee! Great work!
person Black Ice
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was amazing! The descriptions were beautiful and I liked how you couldn't tell who was who and there was no uke or seme; it showed that they were still so connected to each other as twins even while they were lovers. Great job!