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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woah!! I'm so glad to see this has been made into a full-fledged story! What a cliffhanger!! I hope Yuushi doesn't try to get him back or anything, at least he's safe. Poor Orpheus though. After all that planning....well, at least he's the one with the brain...kinda. Yuushi should've made a pit of water on land and have O breathe through that. I can't wait to read the next chapter! great work!
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read this at your Yahoo site some time ago and now I want the next chapter so badly!! :gonk: I love this story! Though, I actually don't care for Yuushi that much...O.o! I like Orpheus. I think he cares in his own way...ANYWAY! I hope you update soon! <3<3 I look forward to it so much!
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! a new chapter!! Oh thank you thank you! Plans of escape?...Oh god please lt it go well and the two live happily ever after! *sparkly eyes of hope*...I dont think I can take much more of thier pain, my ass hurts just thinking about it...*blushes and laughs* J/K Anyways, can't wait until the next update!
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh...Galileo isn't going to like this. Oh no...But that's a pretty nifty idea. And the little budding romance/friendship between Orpheus and Yuushi is so cute. <3 Not much sex this chapter (thought the deep throating was fun) but hey! It's for the sake of progression!! So yes! Excellent chapter. <3
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
drops to her knees begging insesently pleas you have to update please
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
....By god! that was wonderful, a little brutal at times....but still a Magnificent story! I do hope you post chapter four soon! the suspense is killing me! Your fan: Silas
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh that was a heartless place to end. I am suppose to be studying for finals but I had to read this and it was so good I just read it right through. I can't wait to read the rest of it. Please update soon I am looking forward to it.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SWEET!!! YOU DID ANOTHER CHAPTER ON THIS!! YATTAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! And it was sad too...Jerk merman king. ;o; AND STUPID GUARDS!! I hope they get eaten by a giant squid. >=D! And I hope you'll do another chapter on this story! <3<3
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jeez. He's right nasty, isn't he?
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AWESOME.