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April 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I loved this story! Very well written and even with all the porn, the plot was quite good and interesting. Thank you for sharing :)
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February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Because their pain was not as much fun when it was so similar to your own."
Does this mean that the king had fallen in love with Orpheus?
Does this mean that the king had fallen in love with Orpheus?
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One of the best original slash fiction I've read on the site.
You did a brilliant job combining erotica with emotion, and the ending was touching. You are a talented writer in the way you made the rapes seem... not arousing, but interesting nonetheless. The story kept my attention from beginning to end and I absolutely adored it.
I'm also especially happy that you didn't fall for the cliche, having Orpheus break the king's rough exterior and teach him to love and then live happily ever after, because that kind of pain and torture is near impossible to forget, much less forgive. Your characterization was lovely, and I liked all of the characters, even the Beast.
Wonderful job. I really, really look forward to seeing more from you.
-Ella
You did a brilliant job combining erotica with emotion, and the ending was touching. You are a talented writer in the way you made the rapes seem... not arousing, but interesting nonetheless. The story kept my attention from beginning to end and I absolutely adored it.
I'm also especially happy that you didn't fall for the cliche, having Orpheus break the king's rough exterior and teach him to love and then live happily ever after, because that kind of pain and torture is near impossible to forget, much less forgive. Your characterization was lovely, and I liked all of the characters, even the Beast.
Wonderful job. I really, really look forward to seeing more from you.
-Ella
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! HAPPY ENDING!!!
ASOTA
ASOTA
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i want to know more about yushi and orpheus write a sequal or more chapters or somthing
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaawww it ends like that?
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaww~~~ nice and short~ ^_^
yay! *claps* good fic ^_^
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaww~~~ nice and short~ ^_^
yay! *claps* good fic ^_^
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW. I can't believe it's over. This was AMAZING to read, a complete joy in every way. I love your work on principle, but this was in a league of it's own. I can't wait to see more from you.
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had the 17000th hit on this fic. O_o Congrats.
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Incredibly sexy. :]
Strange thing was, though, is that all through the story, my attention was focused on King Poseidon. (: At first, I was hoping that Orpheus would break through the King's exterior and you know, find the good inside him and all the other cliches, but when it was so obvious that he wanted Yuushi... well, I was sort of disappointed.
I'm glad, though, that in the end you didn't forget about the King, and paired him with Galileo. :] A perfect ending to a mesmerizingly erotic story. Forgive me for being squeamish, but take out all the pain and the raping, the sex scenes are fantastic. xD
Strange thing was, though, is that all through the story, my attention was focused on King Poseidon. (: At first, I was hoping that Orpheus would break through the King's exterior and you know, find the good inside him and all the other cliches, but when it was so obvious that he wanted Yuushi... well, I was sort of disappointed.
I'm glad, though, that in the end you didn't forget about the King, and paired him with Galileo. :] A perfect ending to a mesmerizingly erotic story. Forgive me for being squeamish, but take out all the pain and the raping, the sex scenes are fantastic. xD
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love happy endings :) I can't believe I only now found this story, but well done!