rate_review Reviews

WTF!!! That was just....morbid XD. I mean, here I am expecting a happy ending for the couple and a mating....and then pow!! The moon boy goes all cannable and eats the one man he could love XD. Tell me, am I the only one sitting here thinking...what the hell just happened???? Other than that I loved your stories and definately wish some of your oneshots were turned into chapter stories.

The ending completely threw me for a loop. Altogether, it might have been one of the most erotic, hauntingly bittersweet things I've read in a long time. You truly are a master of the written word.

Certainly not the ending I was expecting, but after the initial shock it grew on me. It gave the story a dark quality that might have been a little off-putting if not for the last line, which I think made the story very memorable and not just a shock-giver.

amazing story, one of your best i think
the ending was beautiful, and any other ending would have been wrong
its that dark creepy twist that makes your stories different from a lot of the generic stuff
i loved it

..i dno if i should say the ending was good, since it ended with style, fresh, and adds a turn in the plot, or that it's cruel and sadistic, for even though a "happily-ever-after" could have been sappy, boring and mushy, carnivalism might be a bit too strong...I feel bad for both the spirit and the mortal.

woah totally wasn't expecting that, amazing story
2 best lines in the story were
"the slightest dip as though to suggest what it was lacking. A true spirit then, not born of woman but of the moon itself and nothing more."
and
"“If there was any man I could have loved,” he whispered to the night air, “it would have been you.”"

loved it