rate_review Reviews

Ooo! Cliff hanger. . . wonder if it was Jake. . .or some other current figure. Perhaps someone who could ruin Will and Paul's lives. . .hope not. Hmm. . .wonder, wonder, wonder. Speaking of wonders, you are a wonderful writer!!! You deserver a cookie, and an all important flower, of your choice of course. So, "As it is, it is not the begining nor the end but the middle that counts, as it is."

Awesome can't wait for more!

Love this story. Waiting to where the direction of the story going to go....

O...M...F...G this story is amazing update soon

Your characters have personality, and that's what I like the most so far about your story. Good job. I hope you can keep it up. The scene with Paul and Will in the history wing was a little creepy when Will started walking down the hall and those lights would come on step by step, my mind wouldn't stop supplying this annoying sound effect and for some reason I was imagining it to be practically pitch black. Then again, lights on only where a person is, and with them being the only two in there (so far) It must be pretty dark. Anyway, I can't wait for more! Now then, update! I have to know who stumbles on Paul and Will getting it on!

This story is quite interesting. I love it. One thing though, could you make the chapters longer by any chance? Oh by the way, I despise Kim lol. Update soon and keep the good work up.

I can't believe no one reviewed for this yet. It is good! Yay! Go you.

Wow I really like what you got going here, please update soon I love it.

Hope kim doesn't get to sleep with Jake.