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Fantastic! what a cliff hanger cant wait to read what happens next but I hope the two main characters stay togeher they seem to fit so well, I hope things dont change that much. love the characters, love your style. Great read I really enjoyed it.

GUH! so honestly i wasnt sure how i was gana like the whole mood changing over the the mission and all that but my GOD it was so great! your discription and tone were just .. perfect! and EXCITTING!! geeze ! that count down was just tourture! all of that chapter i was just smiling and readin as fast as i could. And the ending.. .well... your cruel .. but i love it. GREAT WORK! can't wait for more.

Great story with a very evil cliffhanger. Please keep updated. I like your characters. They are pretty original.

Lovely story so far...I hope Alex is okay - and the teenager sounds like a cutie, poor kid!

Man, i didnt want the flashback to end... Great description, interesting way for the two of them to meet. I'm torn, i want to go on the mission but the flashback is so very enthralling. Anywho, just write SOMETHING soon ^^ . nive work. oh, and i love Arthur, btw

I never saw this story ever before.. How could I miss it? I mean I read alot. I'm going on 50 stories a day. It's weird sense I can't finish a book in a week but read 50 stories or so a day. Anyhow! It is go my little friend.

haha! what a great flashback, i like it that Alexander actually lost the fight, that doens't normally happen. I could really go either way with the direction of the story but if i had to choose it would be mission next... People who get caught up in the past tend to loose sight of the future.

excellent chapter, wonderful sex scene. One of my favorite lines was "laced with lust." I just thought that was great... Everything youre doing with this is right on the money, I can't wait to see ayden and alexander alone again.. hehe keep it up. I hope they tell eachother how they feel before something terrible happens to them or their relationship. I just hate it when two people are so distant from one another that they can't express their feelings... But these two seem so close... I'm sure alexander feels the same way. please update soon! I'm at a loss as to what kind of idea's you want for this story though. *ponders for a bit*

I'm really enjoying this story so far. Lots of great elements. Can't wait to read more

excellent story so far! I like the way you gave Alexanders dominant thoughts a voice /Oh, nice vocab word… Does your brain hurt?/ hahah thats great! Keep it up, my vote is on sex as always... but I wonder how this scene would end any differently than sex... By the way you're good at teasing.