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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story I thought it was a nice pscyhological twist to make Tim place the blame of his father's death on Ayden and not Alex because Alex saed his life therefore he couldn't be bad enough to kill his father. There were a lot of spelling mistakes that can be cleaned up with a beta nothing too devastating. I think Ayden's father's name is suppose to be Arthur like King Arthur and not Author like the Author of a book.
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
first off you seem to have labeled chapter six chapter five in the search part... anyway i think... “Cuz there’s another gear here, and she’s beggin’ me to pop it in…” is probably my favorite line form this chapter heh, i just think its great. Update soon! i can't wait to see how they make timmothy feel alllll better... :D
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heh, Alexander had a car-gasm....I feel really bad for timothy, though....
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I hope your next update will be faster. Timothy seems harmless. Hopefully he will be all right. He reminds me of when Aeyden(?) and Xander met. Hopefully he does not come in between our two heroes' relationship, and they are all right.
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked this ch I did tink though that Tim would go for Ayden not for the rough Alex so this was a bit of a surprise for me that he would trust him enough to curl up on his lap.
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi Remon...I just thought I'd let you know that I only just discovered your story...and I like it! The relationship between Alexander and Ayden is good, and especially with Alexanders jealousy of Martin...
Poor Timothy...I don't think he understands what his father did to him is wrong...and he seems to be slightly young in mind for his age...a result of his fathers abuse?...
I really hope you intend to keep to your promise of updating a little more...because I look forward to seeing where this story will go now...
Poor Timothy...I don't think he understands what his father did to him is wrong...and he seems to be slightly young in mind for his age...a result of his fathers abuse?...
I really hope you intend to keep to your promise of updating a little more...because I look forward to seeing where this story will go now...
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, he caught him!!! I love it!
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderous, you'd been cold for so long i figured this fic was dead like so many others. Its an amazing story so far, you've got descritions and prose completely down. You need to start seriously considering writing for money and not just praise from fanboy's. Keep it up! + i want to see some sex soon and that won't happen unless you keep writing!
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH maaan! what an excitting end. Go Alexander! Really great chapter, its weird cuz the suspence i figured would be kinda finishing up in this chaper.. but nope! going strong! haha I cannot wait to see whats up with this cool .. insane artsy kid. Martin got bitched at which always makes me smile. All and all pretty great! Thanks for takin time to update! can't wait till next time :)
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I hope they find him...poor kid =3