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for Things Change

by Zoshia

schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
glad to have you back. can't leave timmy hanging like that.
person WedsLem
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks so much for taking the time to update.. I suppose you were right in your AN about it being slower then usual.. but i really enjoyed it!! I think the dialog about the hight differences was terrific and i laughed out loud when you mentioned Arthur's wife (penises?! eewy!!) No matter how much i loath Martin, i usually really enjoy the subtle way you pull him in every now and then. Anyway... i'm super nervous about where the hell that kid is! Update soon! we need to find him!!
<3

oh..Also, That curse at the end...amazing... lov'd :)
person Bobobo
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*rubs two paddles together furiously* Live dammit! LIVE! *connects both paddles to this fic's dying chest.* CLEAR! *turns up the juice* Not today damn you! Not this one! *surges the dying body with more electricity* Clear! *devolves into hopeless sobs and tears* It... never... gets... any easier!
person WedsLem
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the pow shift, every every interesting seeing what timothy's thoughts... also i love tori! i meen she watches law and order! shes so cool

The first part of the chapter was perfect, and makes me dread the title of this story.
person WedsLem
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wooow... i feel so bad for him.. that was so very depression, but also good in a way. it was wonderfull having Arthur step in. I love all of your characters.
also, its always nice to see Xander mess with Martin... : D
person Bobobo
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter, though i agree his recovery is a little swift but... you know for some reason it feels like its been months..... *looks off into the distance in wonderment*

heh at any rate, its a great one, and i reviewed so you have to uphold your end of the bargain!
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, a lot. Even if Timothy's turnabout is swift. But other than that, well written and compelling. please keep it up.
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story
please update
NONE OF MY AUTHORS WILL!!!

I bet you all belong to some secret organization
where you see how long you can hold out on us before we completly lose it!!

DAMN YOU ALL!!

...that being said

update soon! :)
<3
person Sekre
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I'm glad Arthur was able to get the kid to open up just a little :D Awesome chapter.
person Bobobo
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"After a few long moments the two men just laid there holding each other. Ayden closed his eyes, enjoying every second with the man he loved. Alexander was kissing the side of his head, running his hands through his hair, and breathing slightly harder than normally." This gave me chills it was so adorable.