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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It has been slow for a couple of chapters. Rose is a strange motherly character. Are you sure there is no dark side to her that we need to know? I just had a strange thought: what if Tori was behind the bathroom fiasco? Just a stray thought I am sure nothing more. Hope you take less time to update next time.
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow great chapter! i hadn't checked on it in a while, but i'm glad i did, everything about this is great, the descritption the character development and introductions, i loved the personalities you provided for rose and kristen, they're pretty cool ladies. Also,a common misspelling i'm seeing is fallowed, its actually Followed, other than that it was a wonderfully written chapter.
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! that was such a wonderful update!!!! I couldn't believe that was 11 pages worth.. it went so very fast, i was so sad it was done! I love this family! Rose is basically the best. So. Here is the deal.. I love this story, i love the characters Its absolutely fantastic, so.. um, things can't change. Ya... sorry. But thats the way it is!! Hehehe, really though, you're brilliant so... do your thing, I'll be rocking back in forth in the corner waiting for another update!!
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I can see things are moving along.
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated. i liked getting to see a little bit more of timmy beyond the scared mute. I think the last scene with timmy clinging to Ayden and Alex was very telling of how he saw the two men in his life.
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September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pooooooooooooooor Timmy. People need to leave him the hell alone!!!! Well.. some people... *cough* Excellent chapter! can't wait for more more more more more more!!
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September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It feels like forever since I saw a new ch but I hadn't forgotten anything so that was good. I liked this ch. I think my favorite was after Timmy went to bed and the rescue scene. I liked them being gentle and sensitve with him even though you know they could kick some serious butt. I think I would really like to see their relationship with him develop and Timmy start to trust them morre.
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September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I'm so glad for the update :) Poor Timmy.
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September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope the story will be more regular now. Glad you updated, i have been waiting for a long time. I keep wondering what the motive is behind attacking a rescued child. Could it be someone taking revenge on Xander. I guess i will find out soon enough.
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome, every story needs a little bit of slowness, otherwise there is nothing to compare the action scenes to. great update.