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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Well, if you were listening to something like Cotton Candy or Cherry Pie, it might be easier, but if you're listening to something like Homies or If or anything like that, yeah, I bet it was distracting. I think I'll try it sometime just to see how difficult it is. ^^ I do hope to see more of your writing around.
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was well-written. You kept pace with the flow of the story, and your characters were down-to-earth and you described emotion extremely well.
Great job! Keep up the good work!
Great job! Keep up the good work!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm impressed. You wrote that while listening to ICP? Hell, I'm lucky if I can do anything while listening to them. I'm usually too busy singing along. Seriously though, it was a great story.
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet so very sweet *sigh* Very well done only one thing the proper way to write "atall" is 'at all' they're two different words for the next time *winks*
But once again well done I hope you keep writing I really love these kinda stories *waves goodbye*
But once again well done I hope you keep writing I really love these kinda stories *waves goodbye*
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love the simplicity of it. very well written. ohh and awsome talent at staying focussed
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you had my attention the whole time. Loved everything about this