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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As always, loved it. I really liked the conflict in this chapter, and I hope you bring more to the table. There's a lot of potential places you could take this story, and I think thats one of the reasons I like it so much. And of course, your wonderful writing style.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter =D!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter =D!
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the solution is quite simple really, they would just have to move to one of those small fisherman islands where birth certificates and liscenses are obsolete, and say hey were a married couple instead of brother and sister. Or, if they wanted to actually get married, she could change her last name beforehand, and then they could have a small ceremony that some sort of...preist or whatever conducts and bam. S'all good. They would probably have to go to one of those smalllllll islands like where Survivor takes place though, haha. Or thailand. :)
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please, I love this story a lot, as I'm sure I've said before. Something keeps drawing me back, and I always faithfully await the next chapter. It is great, your writing style is wonderful, so please keep it up!!
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like I said last time, I dont know how I missed reading this story for so long. Honestly, this is one of the best love tales I've ever read. Talk about forbidden. Even if I can't relate to the exact situation these two face, the feelings of forbidden love are relateable. Its like RomeoxJuliet relationship. You make your characters so believable in their actions. Julie is so cute, its hard not to feel for her. I really love this story, its one of my top favourites now.
Keep up the awesome work!
Keep up the awesome work!
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story a lot. Incest...wow, I hope they don't get found out so soon. The fathers sounds clinging in a way. Anways, thanks for the update! This story's great -- you should get more reviews.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Post more soon please.... :)
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm saddened I hadn't read this story sooner! I love your other stories, and this one is really cute! Please more more!
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July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like it!! ^^
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is cute.. yet sad because they will never get to have a wedding or even be open about their relationship
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July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice.
I think this version definitely has more of a defined plot than the originally.
Fuck Mcdonalds, I'm lovin' it.
Ashleigh.
I think this version definitely has more of a defined plot than the originally.
Fuck Mcdonalds, I'm lovin' it.
Ashleigh.