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for Razor's Edge of Love

by ChloeBarnes

person Anon
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for this ending!!^^
person t.k
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe its actually over! I've followed this story for the beginning (and would have reviewed with your last update but I was unable to). I really enjoyed this a lot. Your writing style is incredibly well developed, your diction quite well versed and this story is believable. I'm sad to see it end but all good things must come to an end. I think you concluded it well and in an, again, quite believable. I was so glad to see things work out for them because I found I was quite attached to the characters. You made them feel real.

Well done! Sad that's its over but a great story. I would HIGHLY recommend this story! :D
person Anon
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks!!
person Anon
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks sooooo much for this update!! I already thought there would never again be one and you would leave the story unfinished...so again: thanks for the update!!
PS: the update was on my birthday!! ^^ (27.06.)
person tomok
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so good. I'm finding that I am so attached to this story I can really feel for the characters. I loved what John said to his father. So perfect and shocking =D We need to see more and more confrontation. You seem to be really good with that. Hence why this story is so interesting and captivating.

heh heh. I also thinks those sicknesses have another cause ;D.

Cannot wait for the next chapter! Fabulous!
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
when will you update again?????
person tomok
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Every chapter, I love this story more and more. Well, you know that is true for me with all of your stories. I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter. This a true story of love and its so wonderful. Keep it up!
person Sylvia
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon... :)
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh xD This story makes me so nervous; I keep thinking their father will walk in during one of their sessions. But LET me tell you something, you write some pretty amazing sex scenes. I think you're definitely one of my favorites. Update, when you get the chance? <3
person Anon
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I really like your story a lot and hope that you´ll update as often as possible! *pleeeze?!?!* ^^